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Band 4.5

Last week, you visited a local supermarket and you got satictory.Write a letter to the supermarket manager to thank In your letter -introduce yourself; -say why yoki are satisfied; -say thank you and write about your future visits.

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am
addrressing
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addressing
 you
it
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is
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 to let you know my satisfaction
about
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with
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 the service in the
supermarket
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 your
supermarket
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 local a far from my house but I
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 to visit in the near future again. I am Sabina Norkobilova,a regular customer who lives
in
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near your cottage and regularly buies of
supermarket
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 the
producs
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products
product
.For the
last
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 time,I
uses
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 the services of your
supermarket
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 on February 20,2024, and in the
supermarket
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 bought things I needed
also
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 I was satisfied with your services as a customer. I am satisfied many
convienence
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conveniences
 in your
supermarket
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 and
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the staffs
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staffs
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staff
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 help the service me.
In
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 instance one of that
convienence
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convenience
 a very in prices produced and many discounts. I have to say
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 again,I was
immpressed
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impressed
 by the culture of the employees towards the customers and
theire
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their
there
 dress code. I know your
supermarket
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 achieve
many
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 success in the future and increase customer
degree
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.I hope
this
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supermarket
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 will be
an
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exllent
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excellent
 throughout the district.I
recommened
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recommend
recommended
 my relatives and friends to become customers of
this
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supermarket
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ofen
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and
 to try visiting me too here. Yours faithfully, Sabina Norkobilova

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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. This helps in structuring your thoughts and presenting them in a logical manner.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a proper greeting and closing. While 'Dear Sir or Madam' is appropriate, closing could be improved for a more personal touch, considering the positive experience shared.
Coherence and Cohesion
Stick to one idea per paragraph to make your letter easier to follow. Each paragraph should address a specific point mentioned in the task.
Task Achievement
Address all parts of the task to improve task achievement. Mention specific instances that made you satisfied, and clearly state your gratitude.
Task Achievement
Use a tone that is suitable for a thank-you letter. While your tone is mostly appropriate, avoiding informal expressions and ensuring grammatical correctness could enhance the professionalism of your writing.
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