The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented map indicates some data about future development in the town of Norbiton in its industrial site.
Overall
, it can be seen that some facilities like Playgrounds and schools will be added to
this
region.
In addition
, all of the factories will be replaced by residential complexes. In the south of
this
place, a tiny
square
will be added in order to avoid accidents. On the route between the existing
square
and
this
tiny
square
, Shops and a Medical centre will be built to serve residents and visitors. Turning to the right side of the main
square
, residential complexes will be replaced by factories.
Furthermore
, playground and school will be added respectively at the middle and the end of
this
way. Looking at the west side of the main
square
, an alley surrounded by some houses will be added to the site.
While
considering the north of
this
region, one road will be connected to the residential area at the predicted deadline. To reach
this
destination, passing through a bridge will be needed.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words square with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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