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Task Achievement
To improve your score, start with a clear introduction that directly addresses the question and outlines your stance. Your introduction should succinctly state that you will discuss both views before giving your own opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your essay into paragraphs, each addressing a specific point. Begin with a topic sentence that clearly states the main idea of the paragraph, followed by supporting sentences that develop or explain that idea.
Task Achievement
Use specific examples to support your points. Examples help to illustrate your argument and make it more convincing. These can be drawn from your own experience, the news, history, or literature.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures and vocabulary. This will not only improve your score for lexical resource and grammatical range and accuracy but also make your essay more engaging to read.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite