The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The frame above illustrates figures in three states in the United States. The features are age, average income per person, and
population
beneath the
povery
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poverty
limit. The states are
California
,
Utah
and
Florida
. Concerning age,
Utah
has the highest rate of young people, about 28% of their
population
,
whereas
Florida
has the highest
percentege
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percentage
of people over 60 years (23%).
Utah
has almost a third of its
population
over 60 years when compared to
Florida
.
California
depicts intermediate numbers in both ranges (under 18 and over 60). Analysing the average amount earned per person,
California
has the greatest value ($ 23.000), followed by
Florida
($ 22.000), and
Utah
($ 17.000) is in the
last
position among the three administrative regions. The difference between
California
and
Florida
is only $1.000. Despite the fact that
California
has a good income per person,
this
state presents the worst percentage of people with insufficient resources to survive (16%).
On the other hand
,
Utah
has a lower mean income per
indivudual
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individual
,
however
, shows a better performance
on
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in
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population
above poverty, about 9%, when compared to
California
and
Florida
(12%).
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