Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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considered

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an important factor. in regard to

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, some argue that senior

workers

are only isolated bodies in making

decision

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decisions

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while

, others opine that team

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members

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should

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be included in my view, senior executive should include employees and other

workers

too and in

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will

demontrate

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demonstrate

both

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of the

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argument

on one hand, a growing number of people believe that larger companies

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senior professionals

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because

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because

they are at higher risk

this

is because, they have more to lose than to gain from experiences from lower class

workers

additionally

, they claim that these

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have so much of years of experience that that they can handle

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task with the tip of their fingers

such

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decision

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problem solving

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problem-solving

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strategies etc

also

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young

younger

workers

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learn from their

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and practicals skills

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opportunity to learn and polish practical skills from youngsters

furthermore

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thing

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things

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for

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firm, not only

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the boss

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boss

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boss's

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opinion matter but

also

lower class employees should

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what

i

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mean by

this

is that, when the ground base is strongly

enected

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enacted

,

then

flow

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of

prodctivity

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productivity

rises significantly to

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extent

for instance

in my university labs whenever

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faced difficulty lab assistants always there to help because they have gone far through in solving problems unlike teachers who have speciality limited to

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theoretical

knowledge

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, making them a strong

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pillar

to run businesses smoothly to recapitulate, despite knowing the opinion of senior

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worker

workers

woker

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workers

in

decision

making which include

problem solving

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problem-solving

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and strategies to encounter any risk

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,

i

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tend towards the view of giving ground base

workers

opportunity

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the opportunity

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to cast their opinions too

while

making decisions