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The charts below show the proportions of the world's oíl resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of the world's oíl resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the percentage of the total number of fossil fuels available and the same consumed by
the
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people in different parts of the globe.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the Middle East is the major producer of the total number of
world's
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oil
 reserves,
while
 these
oil
 fuels are mainly consumed by the United States and Asia.
To begin
 with,
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Australia and New Zealand are the least producers of petrol and diesel with a figure of 0.30%.
On the other hand
, approximately the same amount of
oil
 around 1.57% is produced by the United States and Western
Europe
whereas
the
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Eastern
Europe
 and Africa
contributes
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 nearly 6.48% to the world's total fuel reserves.
However
, the Canada and Middle East are the biggest sources of
oil
 generation with
the
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respective figures of 14.84% and 56.52%. With regard to
world's
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the world's
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 total
resources
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 consumption,
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Asia,
United
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the United
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 States and Western
Europe
 consumes the natural resources most with the corresponding figures of 26.21%, 25.48% and 19.24%. The percentage of
oil
 usage by
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Eastern
Europe
,
Middle
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the Middle
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 East and Central and South America is roughly 6.48% which is exactly
the
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double
of
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that of
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 Africa's
oil
 consumption.
Additionally
,
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Canada, Australia and New Zealand
seems
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 to be more eco-friendly as they are less
dependenet
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dependent
 upon natural reserves.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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