The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the diagram illustrates how much the value of one country from
exports
in different five categories during 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, there was an increase in the data of the value from
exports
in the majority of 5 categories, except for gems and jewellery, with
petroleum
products and engineered goods witnessing the highest value from
exports
.
While
a drop was seen in the gems and jewellery sector. The proportion of agricultural products and textiles started at around 30 billion dollars in 2015 to over that number in 2016 and about 27 billion dollars to
also
over 30 billion dollars in the same period, respectively. similar changes but to greater extentes, were seen in
petroleum
and engineered
exports
, which grew from exactly 60 per
cent
of the
Petroleum
products to over that in 2016 and under 60 per
cent
from Engineered goods to the same
petroleum
data in 2016.
Conversely
, over 40 per
cent
of gem and jewellery in 2015, with a subsequent slight decrease to approximately 40 per
cent
.
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