The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrated table and charts above, give some data about police funds which have been spent in one year between 2017 and 2018.
While
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the table shows the
money
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sources in these years, the pie chart tells about spending
money
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in 3 categories. Considering the pie chart, most of the
money
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has been spent on salaries, which has experienced the most downfall after one year compared to technology and buildings and transport.
Furthermore
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, spending
money
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on the buildings and the transport have been stabled without alternation.
On the other hand
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, the police have decided to increase
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spent on technology drastically. Looking at the table, all three sources have decided to give more
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to the police to improve themselves. To illustrate that, the biggest growth can be seen in local taxes. Which is about 11 million pounds.
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, national government and other sources have been slightly increased
as well as
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each other.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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