The graph below shows information about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure below illustrates which languages have been chosen to
study
in one school since 2000 to the present by 13-year-old
students
.
overall
,
while
the
number
of
students
who were interested in learning French was dramatically going down from 2000 to 2005, the figure for the
students
who chose to
study
Mandarin
sharply increased during the same period. It can be seen from the graph that the
number
of
students
choosing to
study
French experienced a peak at 150 in 2000 and fluctuated between 90 to 100 from 2005 to the present.
However
, the rate of
students
who preferred to
study
Mandarin
climbed enormously to a peak of circa 75 from 2000 until 2005 and
then
fell slightly to 65 twice in 2006 and 2008.
Although
the main trend of
students
who selected the French language is descending, it still is the highest in comparison to the
students
who chose
Mandarin
. It means that the lowest
number
of French
language
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is about 90
students
which is higher than the peak of
students
learning
Mandarin
by 15
students
. It is noticeable that both language selections changed by the same
number
but in a vice versa trend.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, students, number, mandarin with synonyms.
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