The charts below show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie graphs illustrate the percentage of energy generated from various sources in a particular country from 1985 to 2003.

Overall

, it can be seen that the greatest number of power was produced from oil,

whereas

the least from hydrogen and other renewable sources in two different years. Looking at the data sets in more detail it can be noticed that oil is the biggest source of energy, it was 52% in 1985

then

decreased to 39%, which was the highest drop between two years.

However

, nuclear showed a similar trend, dropping from 22% to 17% in 1985 to 2003.

On the other hand

, turning to the remaining statistics it can be observed that natural gas stood at 13%. By 2003, it had increased to 23%, which was the largest rise on the charts.

Additionally

, coal and other renewable sites grew 8% and 1% to 13% and 4 % from 1985 to 2003, respectively.

Moreover

, the hydrogen remained constant at 4% over the given period of 18 years.

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