On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter • describe the item you lost • explain how you lost it • tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam
The reason why
i
am writing Change the capitalization
I
this
letter is that I recently lost a valuable item during my holiday and I would like to inform you that i
have a travel insurance policy. Change the capitalization
I
This
is my watch which I lost item.
It was Rolex
watch which cost approximately Correct article usage
a Rolex
me
18.000 dollars.Correct pronoun usage
apply
And it
was green and Correct word choice
It
has
Wrong verb form
had
a
my name Remove the article
apply
inside of
the strap. Change preposition
on
And
Correct word choice
Also
also
It was monetary value and important
item to me.
I Correct article usage
an important
do not
believe how I lost my watch Verb problem
cannot
while
I visited
Nusrat’s restaurant.I can remember correctly it with me at the beginning of the day, when I Wrong verb form
was visiting
comeback
to the hotel in the Correct your spelling
came back
nigh
I realized my watch had been lost.I tried to found but I could not find it.
Correct your spelling
night
However
I hope my travel insurance policy will cover the loss of my personal belongings Add a comma
However,
while
traveling.
Tank
you for your attention to Correct your spelling
Thank
this
latter
.
Yours Faithfully
Akbarshoh QurbonmuratovCorrect your spelling
letter
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coherence cohesion
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The body should be divided into paragraphs, each focusing on a different aspect of the situation.
greeting and closing
Use a more refined closing salutation. 'Tank you' is a typo and 'latter' should be 'letter'. Consider using 'Thank you for your attention to this matter.'
task achievement
For better task achievement, ensure you describe the item in more detail in its own paragraph, detail how it was lost in another, and clearly state your expectation from the insurance company in the final section.
general
Check for spelling and grammatical errors. Use tools or ask for help with proofreading. Consistent errors can significantly affect the reader's perception and the overall professionalism of your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite