the charts below show tha average percentages in meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

the charts below show tha average percentages in meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The three pie charts display the average proportions of
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
in breakfast, lunch,
dinner
and
snacks
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meals consumed in the Americans meals .
Overall
, people tend to consume more
sodium
and saturated fat in
dinner
meal
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.
While
they eat snacks
countian
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contain
high amounts of added
sugar
. Regarding
Americans
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nutrients
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consumption
in
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dinner
, they eat
larger
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a larger
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quantity of
sodium
account
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for 43% and saturated fat
at
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37%
therefore
it
considered
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too
much
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unhealthy. During
lunch
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they intake the same nutrients at 29% and 26% respectively
comparing
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with
the
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dinner
it
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approximately 15 percentage points less.
In addition
, they
also
prefer snacks with
high
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a high
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percentage of added
sugar
at 42% and low
sodium
by only 14%.
However
, the provided data shows that in the breakfast smaller amounts of the three items are consumed, 14%
of
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sodium
, 16%
of
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saturated fat and 16%
of
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added
sugar
which makes it the healthiest meal.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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