The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.

The given maps illustrate the layouts of Seatown that have experienced changes from 1995 until now.

Overall

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it is clear that

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in the past the

town

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was a rural feature.

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, currently, it has become more modern and urban structures can be seen. Previously, the

town

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was greener.A forest park and farmland can be seen in the eastern part of

town

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However

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, now, the forest park has become smaller and it

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has been

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changed into two tennis buildings.

Also

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,the farmland is changed into

golf

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a golf

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place and joined to tennis buildings. Previously, in front of the farmland and forest park, a number of accommodations were seen which are reduced currently.

In addition

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, there was an alternative road that connected to

centre

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the centre

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road of the

town

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, which is completely omitted. There is a road that goes from west to east. In the past, there were shops and fish markets across from each other.

Whereas

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, shops are changed into restaurants and fish markets become apartments.

Furthermore

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, there was a fishing port in the middle of the sea in the past.

Nevertheless

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,it is eliminated now. There was a hotel and a cafe in the east-south of the city that

are

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still located in that place in opposite positions from each other. Meanwhile, a parking area is added to it currently.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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213 words

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The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

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The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.