The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.

The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.
The given maps illustrate the layouts of Seatown that have experienced changes from 1995 until now.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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in the past the
town
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was a rural feature.
However
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, currently, it has become more modern and urban structures can be seen. Previously, the
town
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was greener.A forest park and farmland can be seen in the eastern part of
town
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.
However
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, now, the forest park has become smaller and it
is
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has been
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changed into two tennis buildings.
Also
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,the farmland is changed into
golf
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a golf
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place and joined to tennis buildings. Previously, in front of the farmland and forest park, a number of accommodations were seen which are reduced currently.
In addition
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, there was an alternative road that connected to
centre
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the centre
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road of the
town
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, which is completely omitted. There is a road that goes from west to east. In the past, there were shops and fish markets across from each other.
Whereas
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, shops are changed into restaurants and fish markets become apartments.
Furthermore
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, there was a fishing port in the middle of the sea in the past.
Nevertheless
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,it is eliminated now. There was a hotel and a cafe in the east-south of the city that
are
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is
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still located in that place in opposite positions from each other. Meanwhile, a parking area is added to it currently.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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