The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line graph illustrates three various roots of

air

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pollution caused in the UK between 1990 and 2005.

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it is clear that

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all sources and

also

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,total

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corruption decreased dramatically over that period.

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, transport remain steady from 1990 to 2005. In 1990, industry caused

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deterioration more than other roots at about 6 million

tones

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tonnes

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Then

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a sudden falling surge happened which followed level out in 2005.

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, transport and households experienced the same involvement with a

little

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small

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amount of pollution,at nearly 1.5 million tonnes. Transport,

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, witnessed stability until 2005.

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, households decreased slightly and after a minimal fluctuation, became approximately zero in 2005. Eventually, as

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apply

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can be seen, total

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pollution declined dramatically over that 15 years and stood at about 2.5 million tonnes. Meanwhile, from around 1999 until 2002 has experienced no change which was followed by significant drops in 2005.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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5 paragraphs

146 words

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