The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates three various roots of
air
pollution caused in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
all sources and
also
,total
air
corruption decreased dramatically over that period.
Although
, transport remain steady from 1990 to 2005. In 1990, industry caused
air
deterioration more than other roots at about 6 million
tones
Correct your spelling
tonnes
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.
Then
a sudden falling surge happened which followed level out in 2005.
However
, transport and households experienced the same involvement with a
little
Correct word choice
small
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amount of pollution,at nearly 1.5 million tonnes. Transport,
then
, witnessed stability until 2005.
Whereas
, households decreased slightly and after a minimal fluctuation, became approximately zero in 2005. Eventually, as
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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can be seen, total
air
pollution declined dramatically over that 15 years and stood at about 2.5 million tonnes. Meanwhile, from around 1999 until 2002 has experienced no change which was followed by significant drops in 2005.
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