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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph demonstrates the causes of
air
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pollutants
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 in the UK between 1990 and 2005. Units are measured in
million
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tonnes
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 of
air
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pollutants
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.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that the total
air
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pollutants
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 had been decreasing dramatically from approximately 7 to about 3
million
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tonnes
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.
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, there were 3 main sources of
air
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pollutions
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pollution
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 which were transport, industry, and households, with transport being the highest
contributors
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 over 15 years. Transport, as the most significant source, contributed more than half of the total
air
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pollutions
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pollution
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. The figure stood at just below 6
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990 and dropped slightly around 0.5
million
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tonnes
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 in the following 3 years.
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, in 1996, the number declined significantly to about 3
million
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tonnes
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.
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, in the following years, the trend continued to drop gradually until reaching exactly 2
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005. Regarding the remaining two sources, industry and households, both started at approximately 1
million
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tonnes
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.
Moreover
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,
while
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air
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pollutants
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 from industry slightly increased, the ones from households slightly decreased in 1993. From
this
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 point, the former remained stable at just above 1
million
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tonnes
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, and the latter experienced continuous decline over a decade and
finally
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 being almost gone in 2005.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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