The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph demonstrates the causes of
air
pollutants
in the UK between 1990 and 2005. Units are measured in
million
tonnes
of
air
pollutants
.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the total
air
pollutants
had been decreasing dramatically from approximately 7 to about 3
million
tonnes
.
Additionally
, there were 3 main sources of
air
pollutions
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which were transport, industry, and households, with transport being the highest
contributors
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over 15 years. Transport, as the most significant source, contributed more than half of the total
air
pollutions
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. The figure stood at just below 6
million
tonnes
in 1990 and dropped slightly around 0.5
million
tonnes
in the following 3 years.
Then
, in 1996, the number declined significantly to about 3
million
tonnes
.
Finally
, in the following years, the trend continued to drop gradually until reaching exactly 2
million
tonnes
in 2005. Regarding the remaining two sources, industry and households, both started at approximately 1
million
tonnes
.
Moreover
,
while
air
pollutants
from industry slightly increased, the ones from households slightly decreased in 1993. From
this
point, the former remained stable at just above 1
million
tonnes
, and the latter experienced continuous decline over a decade and
finally
being almost gone in 2005.
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