You recently received a letter from a friend asking for your advice on whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: • say why she will not enjoy going to college • explain why getting a job is a good idea • Suggest the type of job that would be suitable.
I'm writing
this
recommendation letter for camp, to suggest a sports trainer at your camp.
My friend's name is Og'ash. I have known him since we were children. If I'm not mistaken from first grade. And we are keeping in touch now. He is a responsible guy.
As far as I know him, he has two silver medals and one gold medal from a boxing competition. He also
knows little about football, basketball, and any other sports. A year ago he went to the gym too, and this
day he goes to the gym too.
As I mentioned through his experiences and with attention to your accusation opportunities requirements. I believe fully that you found the trainer, you were searching for.
I will wait for your answer or I will attach my phone number and email address to this
letter
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Greeting and Closing
Include a formal greeting and closing to enhance the structure and tone of your letter, which is essential for maintaining appropriate communication style.
Complete Response
Clarify and expand on the reasons why a job, specifically as a sports trainer, is suitable for your friend, Og'ash. Provide more detailed examples of his qualifications and experiences that make him a good fit for the position.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a more consistent and formal tone throughout your letter to match the professional context of a recommendation letter. Avoid casual expressions and ensure clarity in your explanations.
Logical Structure
Use clear paragraphing to separate different ideas: one for introducing Og'ash and your relationship with him, another for his qualifications, and a final one for the conclusion and your contact details.
Coherence and Cohesion
To improve coherence, ensure a clear flow between sentences and paragraphs. Use linking words effectively to connect your ideas smoothly.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.