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Your next-door nieghbour often listens to loud music at night. Due to loud music, you often struggle to sleep and experience frequent headaches. Write a letter to your building manager. In your letter; *describe the situation *explain the problems causing you *offer at least one solution

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding my neighbour who is residing next to my door.
Firstly
 I would like to draw your attention to is loud music at night from my
nieghbour's
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neighbour's
 room. Because he often listens to music
that is
 very loud.
In addition
 I often struggle to sleep and experience frequent headaches because of loud music from my
nieghbour's
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neighbour's
 room.
Also
this
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 days I always take
a
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apply
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medicines in order to ease the pain and what is more the doctor provides me
an
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 injection. In
conlution
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conclusion
 I would greatly appreciate it if my
nieghbour
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neighbour
 could turn down the loud voice. And I will wait
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 from my
nieghbour
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neighbour
. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your
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 faithfully, Ashurov Sardor.
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structure
Ensure that each paragraph carries a single idea. Your first paragraph can introduce the situation, the second can describe the issues caused, and the last can suggest solutions and any other closing remarks.
accuracy
Check for spelling mistakes ('neighbour' instead of 'nieghbour', 'conclusion' instead of 'conlution') and grammar errors to ensure clarity and professionalism in your letter.
content
To improve task achievement, make sure that your proposed solutions are clear and feasible. For instance, besides asking your neighbour to reduce the volume, suggesting specific quiet hours or a meeting between you, your neighbour, and the building manager could show a willingness to compromise and resolve the issue effectively.
coherence
For a more coherent letter, connect your ideas using linking words and phrases. Also, ensure that your paragraphs flow logically from the situation to the problem, and finally to the proposed solution.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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