some university students want to learn about other subjects in additioon to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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question

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colleges should put unrelated

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courses

in

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schedule

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or not is a contentious one.

Although

there would be precious

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course

among those subjects, I believe it has its own drawbacks, either. Looking at the

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dark side

of

this

proposal,

first,

a majority of students pay considerable

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tuition

fees to obtain what they have already enrolled on;

thus

, it could be disappointing for them if they do not gain it.

Moreover

, there are numerous miscellaneous institutes

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accomplish

if

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for those who are both intended and

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volunteer

.

For instance

; museums are

helding

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holding

some workshops surrounding history,

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matters and ancient artefacts;

therefore

, if someone inclines to know about them, she or he will participate in them.

Last

but not least, university attendants passed unrelated subjects in the high schools or primary schools before, so

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there is no need to recall or expand them any longer.

On the other hand

, the beneficial aspects of the

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talking

point

is

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nothworthy

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noteworthy

, with providing

anew

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chance for trainees to know what their real aim and

ambitios

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ambition

ambitious

ambitions

is

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, by minding them, the arena of science is wide enough to explore

to explore

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in

other

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side of it.

Furthermore

, sometimes individuals find a viewpoint that can have

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on their main subject by which they

they

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would be able to make

connection

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with other students to solve a crucial problem. what is more, it is expected from an

accademy

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academy

attendant to at least

has

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not only an acceptable amount of

specilised

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specialised

specialized

knowledge but

also

a great deal of general information and awareness regarding

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society.

To conclude

, even though the benefits of

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subject

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subjects

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seems

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appealing, it is not

defenitely

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definitely

students

looking

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forward

.

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