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the line graph shows the wheat export of canada , austarlia and european countries

the line graph shows the wheat export of canada , austarlia and european countries
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The information about the quantity of
wheat
 exported in three different countries between 1985 and 1990 is depicted by the rendered linear representation. The data has been calibrated in numbers.
To sum up
, it can be vividly manifested that the figures of Australia experienced
downward
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a downward
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 trend throughout the whole period,
While
 European
communites
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communities
community
 can be seen with
upward
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an upward
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 trend till the end of the period.
On the other hand
, Canada noticed with fluctuated figures. Upon initial examination of the chart, a negligible incline was noticed in the trade overseas of
wheat
 in
australia
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Australia
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 which was 15
million
tonnes
 and almost 16
million
tonnes
, correspondingly.
Further
 analysis reveals that in
australia
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Australia
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,a consistent decrease could be observed in the transported
wheat
 till 1990 which
was
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accounted
around
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for around
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 11
million
tonnes
. Analyzing the data in more detail, the amount of
wheat
which
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sent to European countries from nearly 16
million
tonnes
 in 1985 decreased to 14
million
tonnes
 in 1986,
whereas
 the
numbers
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number
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 of
wheat
 transferred increased to about 22
million
tonnes
 in 1990. Probing ahead, there was a sharp
increament
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increment
increase
 of 10
million
tonnes
 in the exported
wheat
, Whilst a
drammatic
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dramatic
 reduction was apparent from 1988
untill
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until
 1999, the former one was 25
million
tonnes
 and the latter was 15
million
tonnes
.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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