The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows various
type
of industries Fix the agreement mistake
types
proportion
in Brazil
's economy
in 2009 and 2019 with a projection for 2029.
Firstly
, Finance was on
the top in terms of percentage of Change preposition
at
Brazil
's economy
in 2009 at around 30%. It then
had a slight increase to just above 35% in 2019. Subsequently
, in 2029, the industry keep the majority of the share with approximately 40%.
Secondly
, tourism and oil, coal and gas were the second largest contributing industry
Fix the agreement mistake
industries
of
Change preposition
to
Brazil
's economy
with a total around
25% in 2009. In 2019, it decreased a bit to around 20%. The industry remained steady in projection 2029. Change preposition
of around
On the other hand
, Oil, coal and gas rose its contribution to just above 30%. After that, the proportion
was projected had
a dip and back to its beginning value in 2029.
Of the other industries, the Change the verb form
to have
proportion
of Brazil
's economy
was fluctuated
. The total Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
proportion
was less than 25%. It was expected to have less than 10% in 2029.
Overall
, Finance was
led the competition among other industries in Unnecessary verb
apply
term
of contributing to Fix the agreement mistake
terms
Brazil
's economy
. Conversely
, oil, coal and gas was
the second.Change the verb form
were
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