The diagram below shows the stages in the erosion of a headland.
The diagram illustrates the
stages
of Use synonyms
headland
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erosion
.
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Overall
, it Linking Words
clear
there are four Add a missing verb
is clear
stages
of Use synonyms
erosion
of the Use synonyms
headland
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and
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apply
the first step is
weak areas stock eroded Linking Words
then
it is increased by the next Linking Words
stages
until the final Use synonyms
stage
.
The first Use synonyms
stage
of Use synonyms
erosion
is weak areas stock eroded which is Use synonyms
the
iceberg starts to melt in a small cave. Rephrase
when the
Cave
become Fix the agreement mistake
Caves
arch
shape when Correct article usage
an arch
Correct article usage
the iceberg's
iceberg's
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icebergs
melting
Replace the word
melt
is
increasing Unnecessary verb
apply
its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
look
like a curdle door and Correct subject-verb agreement
looks
dorset
Change the capitalization
Dorset
this
is the second Linking Words
stage
of Use synonyms
erosion
. Use synonyms
Then
the next Linking Words
stage
is water Use synonyms
beats
against Wrong verb form
beating
roof
stack Correct article usage
the roof
as well as
stack Linking Words
also
Linking Words
start
to reduce Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
by
Change preposition
apply
erosion
. Use synonyms
The
Correct article usage
Last
last
but not least Linking Words
of
the final Change preposition
apply
stage
is Use synonyms
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headland
retreating again Correct article usage
the headland
increased
to big size as compared to the previous Wrong verb form
increasing
stage
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along with
Linking Words
stump
Correct article usage
the stump
is
being newly Unnecessary verb
apply
begins
and stack and stump Wrong verb form
begun
are
increased in the fifth Unnecessary verb
apply
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stages
of Fix the agreement mistake
stage
headland
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erosion
.Use synonyms
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