The diagram below shows the stages in the erosion of a headland.

The diagram below shows the stages in the erosion of a headland.
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The diagram illustrates the
stages
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of
headland
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erosion
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.
Overall
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, it
clear
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there are four
stages
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of
erosion
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of the
headland
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and
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apply
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the first step is
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weak areas stock eroded
then
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it is increased by the next
stages
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until the final
stage
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. The first
stage
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of
erosion
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is weak areas stock eroded which is
the
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iceberg starts to melt in a small cave.
Cave
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become
arch
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an arch
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shape when
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the iceberg's
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iceberg's
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icebergs
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melting
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melt
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is
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apply
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increasing
its
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apply
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look
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looks
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like a curdle door and
dorset
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this
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is the second
stage
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of
erosion
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.
Then
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the next
stage
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is water
beats
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beating
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against
roof
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the roof
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stack
as well as
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stack
also
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start
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starts
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to reduce
by
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apply
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erosion
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.
The
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last
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but not least
of
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the final
stage
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is
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headland
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the headland
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retreating again
increased
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to big size as compared to the previous
stage
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along with
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stump
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the stump
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is
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being newly
begins
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begun
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and stack and stump
are
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increased in the fifth
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stages
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stage
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of
headland
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erosion
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stages, headland, erosion, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Headland
  • Erosion
  • Weathering
  • Geographical significance
  • Cracks
  • Caves
  • Arch
  • Stack
  • Stump
  • Coastal landscape
  • Human intervention
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