The graph below shows unemployment rates and average earning according to level of education

The bar graph illustrates unemployment rates and

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of

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weekly earnings by education

levels

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level

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in 2016.

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2016. They

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four different groups,

such

as

graduate

degrees

,

collage

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degrees

, some

collages

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colleges

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and

last

but not least high school diplomas. In the first

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it’s crystal clear that the unemployment rates in 2016 in four distinctive groups. Taking a closer look at the people who

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the high school diplomas

and

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it’s

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was 5.50 percent.

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, the

graduate

degrees

and the

collage

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degrees

were approximately close to each other

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and 2.50 percentage points respectively.

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unemployment education levels were higher than

graduate

and

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college

degrees

. When we look at the second chart, it’s showing the relationships between education level and weekly earnings. Only high school diplomas earned the least amount of money per

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week; it was 600 USD.

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, the second lowest one was

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collages

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was 675 USD. People who studied for a college degree and

graduate

degree earned 1500 and 1100 USD, respectively.