The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the village of Bunborough nowadays and the construction plan which will be implemented in 2024.
Overall
, it is possible to note that the proposed plan brought investments
on
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transport
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system and more urbanization to the
area
. Talking about ways of
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, a railway line will be implanted from the right top of the map to the bottom of it, connecting the two extremes of the village.
Besides
that, the road which is located on the top of the village connecting the housing
area
to the
internstate
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interstate
which links
Maychester
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Manchester
to Lynwich will be
splited
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to achieve the
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of Bunborough. Now, taking a look at the central
area
, we can see that it will be more urbanized receiving more houses on the top.
In addition
, a promenade will be built on the shore, where in the present is located the fishing port. To explore touristically the site, two hotels will be placed, one next to the promenade and another on the beach
area
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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