The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the total music sold by three different ways between 2011 to 2010.overall ,it can be seen that the percentage of music sold through download and cds purchased decreased,while by stream increased over the given time period.
The line chart compares three different proportions of music sales Including streams,
dawnloads
and CDs purchased from 2011 to 2018.
Correct your spelling
downloads
Overall
, the vast majority of music sales was the purchase of CDs In 2011, whilst the trend was changed by downloads before 2014. In 2017, the purchase of streames exceeded the rest proportions and became the main trend.
According to
the information shown in the graph, 55% of the sales was
based on the purchased CDs. In 2011 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
which
was 11 times more than that of streams. Correct pronoun usage
it
However
, the tendency of downloads kept rising from 2011 to 2014 with a 10% increase which reached 45% and plummeted from 45% to 20% between 2014 to 2018. What should be
particularly mentioned was the consumption of streams skyrocketed from 5% to 41% in 7 years.
To sum up
, it can be apparently
seen the music industry dramatically changed in the given time.Replace the word
apparent
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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