The maps below show the changes that took place at a science and technology museum between 1996 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The maps illustrate the changes that have taken place at the Science and Technology
Museum
since its construction in 1996 until 2016. Overall
, the museum
has expanded and constructed, resulting new
and modernise buildings, Change preposition
in new
along with
a new area
in parking
lot.
At the outset of the period, there were only seven Add an article
the parking
a parking
museum
areas with a spacious car park. Meanwhile, over the next two decades, there were
an increase Correct subject-verb agreement
was
of
the Change preposition
in
room
variety to ten and a divide of
the parking Change preposition
in
area
for car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bicycle
. The expansion of the main establishment Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
were
built to accommodate the VR Change the verb form
was
room
beside the library and the construction of a new small building behind the parking zone were
constructed to be a Solar Wind Change the verb form
was
area
.
On the other hand
, most of the old spaces that exist
in 1996 were moved and replaced by a new functional place. With the appearance of new Wrong verb form
existed
zone
Change the noun form
zones
such
as 3D Cinema and VR room
, there were
Change the verb form
was
also
a replacement of the area
including Cafe
, Print Correct article usage
a Cafe
Room
, and Diesel Engine Exhibition that became Restaurant
, Digital Correct article usage
a Restaurant
Techonology
Correct your spelling
Technology
Room
and Computers. Library
and Reception were the Correct article usage
The library
area
that Change the noun form
areas
are
expanded and slightly moved to the nearest Wrong verb form
were
area
of the museum
. Whereas
, the only spot that remained over 20-year
development was the Steam Engine Exhibition.Correct your spelling
20 years of
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, area, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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