The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrient, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts display the percentage of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar in normal meals eaten by people living in America that may not be healthy if consumed too much.

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, the charts show different types of nutrients in breakfast, lunch,

dinner

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, and

snacks

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. Foods that contain sodium and saturated fat are mostly eaten during

dinner

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time,

while

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sugary foods are eaten for

snacks

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. Around 43% and 37% of

American

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Americans

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have

dinner

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meals which

has

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mineral and fat, respectively. Sodium and fat are less likely to be eaten for

snacks

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and breakfast.

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, those two are contained in almost similar

percentage

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percentages

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which are around 26%-29% that

American

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Americans

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eat for lunch. People in America consume around 42% of sugary

snacks

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while

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they eat minimal of them for breakfast and lunch

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that

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which

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is around 16% and 19%,

consecutively

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respectively

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. Second to

snacks

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, foods that are prepared for

dinner

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, have around 23% of sugar in them.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, snacks with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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