All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Facing the current world’s

concern

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related to

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environmental issues, vehicles which make use of oil-based

combustible

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should be replaced by electric

cars

.

This

essay totally agrees with

this

position, as far as dioxide carbon emission from exhaust plays an immense role in environmental impact.

Besides

that, feeding our

cars

with oil means dissemination of breathing disease in urban populations.

 In many cities across the

world

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there are a huge number of

cars

stuck in

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traffic. All these vehicles provide tons of exhaust fumes

everyday

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above our heads, which linger in the sky,

traveling

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to

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anywhere.

Such

pollutant gases accumulate in

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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and create a kind of isolation layer around the planet, provoking the so-called greenhouse effect.

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, we have

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experienced an increase

of

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the average temperature of the globe, trigging damage in different

biomas

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biomes

biomass

and their ecosystems.

For instance

, the melting of glaciers and overheating of the seas.


In addition

, when people are exposed to high levels of pollutant gases, they develop medical conditions. One of the main causes

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this

,

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is the fact that fossil fuels are highly toxic to

human

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body.

In other words

, our exposition to

this

kind of substance poisons our respiratory system. The development of illness among

urban

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population is alarming, as far as they inhale exhaust fumes every single day. Respiratory allergies and lung diseases,

such

as asthma and cancer are frequent in metropolitan cities like Xangai in China and São Paulo in Brazil.

This

is a direct result of thousands of

cars

burning fossil fuel daily.

To conclude

, as we can see, using oil-based fuels to move our

cars

is something which endangers all forms of life

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this

planet. Fossil combustible is poison to the environment, ecosystems and human life.

For

this

reason, the measure of replacing

cars

using fuel

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electric ones is something urgent to change the current critical plight.