The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.   Write at least 150 words.
The flow diagram presents the natural process of the
water
cycle. In general,
this
endless process
divides
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into three stages which mainly include evaporation, condensation and precipitation. At
first,
water
takes a liquefied form which exists in lakes, rivers, ground waters or seas. Owing to the evaporation, it transforms into a gaseous form
,
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and
then
reaches
at
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a
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high altitude.
Subsequently
, the gaseous
water
is gradually cooled and turns into clouds, and
this
process is defined as condensation. Eventually,
due to
an increase in the volume of the clouds, the
water
droplets fall from the sky as precipitation or snow depending on the degree of the temperature. After that,
water
returns to the Earth’s ground, it mainly flows
on
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the
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streams and rivers,
while
the rest travels through soils and rocks to store as
ground
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groundwater
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water
.
At
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the end, when
water
flows to the ocean, it evaporates and
then
the
water
cycle starts again.
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