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The given pie charts shows the proportion of British students able yo use languages other than english. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given pie charts shows the proportion of British students able yo use languages other than english. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The Pie Charts represent the comparison of British
students
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' ability to use foreign
languages
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 but
English
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 10 years apart. Calibration of data is done in per cent.
Overall
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, the proportion of
students
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 who mastered language aside from
English
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 increased well. In 2000,
students
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 that only speak
English
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 were five amount of the full
students
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,
in contrast
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 in 2010
this
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 percentage decreased by half the presentation to 10%.
Moreover
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,
students
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 who speak two other
languages
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also
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 had a 5% increasing percentage in 2010 from 10 to 15%.
To begin
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 with,
students
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 included in
this
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 report who are able to speak one language other than
English
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 dominated the other option given. The rank of
languages
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 that are most spoken is mostly the same throughout the years. Spanish is the first rank of most spoken
languages
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while
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 other
languages
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 placed second.
Although
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 in 2000, french was used widely by
students
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, its percentage lessened ten years later. Currently, Both German and French are placed third in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, languages, english with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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