The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph depicts the release of CO2 increased during the
avarage
carbon dioxide ( CO2) Correct your spelling
average
release
per individual in four countries Wrong verb form
released
within
1967 to 2007.
Change preposition
from
Overall
,in Portugal and ItalyAdd a comma
,
period
of 1967 to 2007 while
in United Kindom the amount was reduced gradually during this
period
. However
, in the
Sweden within the first Correct article usage
apply
decade
the CO2 emissionAdd a comma
decade,
was
increased followed by a decline Unnecessary verb
apply
thereafter
.
In detail, United Kindom was
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apply
emited
nearly 11 metric Correct your spelling
emitted
tons
of CO2 during the year
1967 and compared to other countries it is the highest amount per that year
and for the whole graphted
time Correct your spelling
graphed
period
. Whearas
, in 1967 Portugal released only one metric ton of CO2 and Correct your spelling
Whereas
that is
the least amount per that year
and the whole graphted
Correct your spelling
graphed
period
.
In Italy , during the year
1967
just above 4 metric Add a comma
1967,
tons
of CO2 was emited
and that level increased markedly within the next 10 years to achieve a level Correct your spelling
emitted
around
6.5 metric Change preposition
of around
tons
of CO2 in 1977 . Thereafter
, it again increased slightly during the next two decade
to record approximately 7.5 Metric Fix the agreement mistake
decades
tons
in the year
1997 and that level was maintained during the last
ten years.Submitted by dinaka0001 on
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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