The line graphs illustrates average costs of “high-tech gadgets” in Somecountry.
The line graphs
illustrates
Change the verb form
illustrate
average
costs of “high-tech gadgets” in Somecountry.
Correct article usage
the average
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that both the lines
graphs show similar trends. Change the noun form
line
However
, the navigation system started higher compared to smart phone
.
Regarding the navigation system, the Correct your spelling
smartphone
graph
started at approximately 3900 US dollars
and declined by 700 US dollars
. The graph
continued to decrease and dropped by 100 US dollars
and reached at
3100 US Change preposition
apply
dollars
in 2005 Jul-Dec. It started to rise at 3400 US dollars
in 2006 Jan-June before dropping to its lowest point at 2700 US dollars
in 2006 Jul-Dec.
On the other hand
, the average prices
of smart phone only started at 3100 US Fix the agreement mistake
price
dollars
. The graph
slightly decreased by 300 US dollars
in 2005 Jan-June. This
drop is followed by a slight increase by
100 US Change preposition
of
dollars
before dropping to 2700 US dollars
in 2006 Jan-June. The graph
remained stable until the end of the period.Submitted by tiana29.alisjahbana on
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