The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given maps illustrate
todays
layout of a Change to a genitive case
today's
suburb
area named Islip Replace the word
suburban
,
and its proposed progression Remove the comma
apply
plan
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, with the new Linking Words
plan
many Use synonyms
infarstructure
facilities will be introduced to the Islip town. Which include new Correct your spelling
infrastructure
road ways
, new shopping centers and new housing. Correct your spelling
roadways
However
, some previous facilities will Linking Words
be remained
the same or relocated with the upcoming Wrong verb form
remain
plan
Use synonyms
while
,some may be abolished or diminished with it.
In detail, a circular road with dual carriageways Linking Words
centering
the main facilities will be Change the spelling
centring
constracted
with the new development ,and the main road which is going West to the East, across the town will be converted to a Correct your spelling
constructed
pedestrian only
path, with the Add a hyphen
pedestrian-only
porposed
Correct your spelling
proposed
plan
.
The school situated Southwest of the city willUse synonyms
be remained
unchanged and the housing East Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
to
the school will Change preposition
of
also
Linking Words
be remain
the same. Change the verb form
remain
Although
Linking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
park
will be kept Add an article
the park
at
the same place it will be reduced in area Change preposition
in
copmared
to the Correct your spelling
compared
presentday
.Correct your spelling
present day
present-day
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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