Opinion With internet improvements, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, with the new developments, individuals can leave their comments or

opinions

on certain products or services that they have bought. There might be some drawbacks

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that

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essential in the diffusion of

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' reputation, and the truth about quality which can save many

customers

from being deceived.

To begin

, today many

vievers

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viewers

of social media are posting different comments expressing their verdict upon certain

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. With the improvements of new

technologies

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it became possible to clearly share

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experiences

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with others just within a fraction of a second. And, many

companies

could easily benefit from these correlations.

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one of the main factors that amplifies the chance to spread

companies'

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reputation is

a

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feedback. Feedback plays a huge role in the

customers

' selections and could easily navigate them to whether

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or discard

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commodities

.

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,

companies

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favourable votes and

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might become dominant in

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contests.

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superiority in the field of technology

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collecting

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manifesting

customers

' gratification.

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and

opinions

of people may save millions of individuals from being deceived.

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every platform in social

network

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networks

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has its own statistics and total rates of

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that appear on screens right before ordering or acquiring a specific product. And, they may serve as a great precaution for many humans owing to the fact that goods

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internet

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could contain misleading

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on the account of quality and availability.

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why, personal

opinions

of people could prevent

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obscure consequences. To

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, the app called Play Market offers a great majority of products

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and has a special line full of

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that could help many users to buy reliable and

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verified goods. In conclusion, with technological advancements individuals can publish their personal views and

opinions

.

This

may be a negative development in some cases,

however

,

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essay trusts that there are more positive traits, because of the importance of

feedbacks

that help to spread

companies

' reputation and, revelation of truth that can save many

customers

from being deceived.