The diagram show the production of hydro-electricity from water power

The diagram show the production of hydro-electricity from water power
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram show the production of hydro-electricity from water power
Cotained
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Contained
in the illustration is the information pertaining to the various steps of electricity production from
hydro power
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hydropower
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.
Overall
Linking Words
, it can be observed that the process commences with the
preassurization
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pressurization
pressurisation
of water via a dam to the rotation of
turbine
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the turbine
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for transforming into necessary power before being ready to be supplied
for
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to
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consumers.

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