3. Some people say that the best way to reduce traffic and pollution is the government to increase tax of petrol (gasoline). Do you think there are more benefits or more drawbacks?

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has become one of the main problems in the whole world. There are many things that affect

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,

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.

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and

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are connected to each other, the more

traffic

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the more

pollution

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. Many people believe that increasing the

tax

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on petrol or

gasoline

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is the best way to decrease the amount of

traffic

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and

pollution

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rate. The increasing

tax

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of

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patrol

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petrol

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or

gasoline

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brings

positif

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positive

and

negatif

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negative

effects at the same time.

Patrol

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or

gasoline

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are

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one of the

transportation

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main

need

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. It is the energy source of

transportations

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transportation

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. Transportations are used for many purposes, for

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example for deliveries. If

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tax

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the tax

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of

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on

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gasoline

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increases, the cost of the deliveries is going to increase

also

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. It means that the increasing of the cost will happen to the stuff which

are

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carried by deliveries as well. The stuff that I mean like rice, vegetables, fruits,

textile

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textiles

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, oil,

and

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et cetera. The impact will

so

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big.

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, the increasing

of

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tax

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of

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on

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patrol

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petrol

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or

gasoline

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has benefits as well. It can reduce the number of

transportation

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. People will choose to use public

transportation

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instead

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of private

transportation

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because the cost will be cheaper. The less

of

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apply

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private

transportation

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the less

pollution

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, which is good for

environment

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.

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,

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less of using private

transportation

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can increase the possibility of physical activity of a person. For

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example, they will go to a stop on foot to catch a bus.

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,

i

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would suggest that

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the government

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can choose to increase the

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patrol's

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patrol

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tax

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to reduce

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pollution

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and

traffic

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.

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, there are a lot of things that need to be

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especially for

controling

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controlling

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inflation.