The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of a bus company's performance in terms of actual and
target
punctuality
along with
complaints
from passengers. From 1999 to 2003. From an
overall
perspective,
target
punctuality
was higher proportion than actual
service
of
punctuality
while
complaints
were
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increased from
beginning
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the beginning
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of the
year
to until end of the
year
. In detail, in 1999,
target
punctuality
was higher than providing
service
ilof actually, which accounts for 86 per
cent
then
next
year
, there was a dramatic difference between
target
and actual
punctuality
, at 86
percentage
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per cent
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and 82 per
cent
respectively. these two years
target
of providing
service
on time was the same number. In 2000,
target
punctuality
had
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was
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85 per
cent
while
actual
service
on time
had
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was
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83
percentage
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per cent
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. In 2002, the bus company
maintain
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maintained
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the same
target
, which was 85 per
cent
but actual
punctuality
was reduced as compared to the previous
year
, at 84 per
cent
.
In contrast
, actual
punctuality
was
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dominated the
target
punctuality
, which accounts for around 84 per
cent
and 83 per
cent
respectively.
Furthermore
,
complaints
from passengers in 1999, just 70
then
it
was
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increased by 100 in 2000.
On the contrary
,
complaints
was
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were
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reduced slightly, which was 82. From 2000 to 2003,
complaints
was
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increased from 110
to120
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to 120
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words target, punctuality, complaints, service, year, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.

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