The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given diagrams depict the life cycle of the
silkworm
and
steps
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the steps
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in
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the manufracturing
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manufracturing
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manufacturing
of
silk
cloth.
Overall
, the life cycle of
silkworm
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a silkworm
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spends
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is
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approximately 12 weeks,
passes
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and passes
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four different stages as "
silkworm
larva
", "
silk
thread
", "cocoon" and "moth",
depends
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depending
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on the
mulberry
leaf
as the food. The
coccon
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cocoon
is used to manufacture the
silk
fabric, and the procedure is completed in four different stages.
FIrst
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First
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of all, a moth lays eggs on
a the
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a
the
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mulberry
leaf
and after 10 days a
silkworm
larva
apears
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appears
from the eggs ,and
it
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apply
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eats the
mulberry
leaf
for food.
There after
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Thereafter
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in 4-6
weeks
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weeks,
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the
larva
strats
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starts
to
secreat
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secret
silk
thread
around it and in another 3-8 days it entraptes in a
slik
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silk
thread
covering which
names
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is names
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cacoon, following that in 16 days a moth appears from the cacoon, and it
lay
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lays
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eggs on the
mulberry
leaf
and the life cycle repeats.
Beside
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this
, the cacoon is used for the
silk
textile
ptoduction
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production
.
First,
the cocoon is boiled in water to remove the
larva
inside it , and the cocoon is
then
unwinded to form 300-900m
thread
,
thereafter
it is twisted and used to weave cloth. The twisted threads or
wooven
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woven
woollen
cloth is soaked in a dye to add colour to the fabric.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words silkworm, silk, larva, thread, mulberry, leaf with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Silkworm (Bombyx mori)
  • Sericulture
  • Egg
  • Larva/larvae
  • Cocoon
  • Moth
  • Mulberry leaves
  • Pupa/pupae
  • Spinning
  • Weaving
  • Dyeing
  • Silk threads
  • Silk cloth
  • Life cycle
  • Metamorphosis
  • Harvesting
  • Domestication
  • Natural fibers
  • Textile industry
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