The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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silkworm

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and

steps

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the steps

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in

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the manufracturing

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manufracturing

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manufacturing

of

silk

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cloth.

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, the life cycle of

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silkworm

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a silkworm

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spends

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approximately 12 weeks,

passes

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and passes

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four different stages as "

silkworm

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larva

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", "

silk

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thread

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", "cocoon" and "moth",

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on the

mulberry

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leaf

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as the food. The

coccon

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cocoon

is used to manufacture the

silk

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fabric, and the procedure is completed in four different stages.

FIrst

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of all, a moth lays eggs on

a the

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a

the

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mulberry

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leaf

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and after 10 days a

silkworm

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larva

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apears

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appears

from the eggs ,and

it

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apply

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eats the

mulberry

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leaf

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for food.

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in 4-6

weeks

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the

larva

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strats

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starts

to

secreat

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secret

silk

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thread

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around it and in another 3-8 days it entraptes in a

slik

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silk

thread

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covering which

names

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cacoon, following that in 16 days a moth appears from the cacoon, and it

lay

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eggs on the

mulberry

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leaf

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and the life cycle repeats.

Beside

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, the cacoon is used for the

silk

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textile

ptoduction

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production

.

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the cocoon is boiled in water to remove the

larva

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inside it , and the cocoon is

then

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unwinded to form 300-900m

thread

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,

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it is twisted and used to weave cloth. The twisted threads or

wooven

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woven

woollen

cloth is soaked in a dye to add colour to the fabric.