The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The three pie charts provide the data on average consumption of
food
in the world in 2008 in comparison with two countries; China and India.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen within the charts that processed food
is the highest consumption food
, followed by vegetables and fruits. Meanwhile, animal food
and nuts and seeds were the third and fourth respectively.
Looking at the charts in more detail,Submitted by Deddymus on
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