Do you think Businesses should hire employees for entire lives .do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that any

companies

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would like loyal employees to work in their

company

to feel more secure and able to trust their skills to manage the

company

. In my perspective ,I disagree with the statement above in spite of two

factor

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such

as limited

acess

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access

to new

tehnologies

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technologies

and

idea

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for both

employee

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employees

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and the

company

. In the next paragraph , I will discuss the reason

of

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this

in detail.

To begin

with, In

this

advacements

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advancement

advancements

of technologies and the internet , the workers should explore

on

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more about

this

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these

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new methods to

product

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produce

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good productivity

to

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the

company

.

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, working in

multiple

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billions

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company

such

as Tesla can learn more about high tech namely electronic

car

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,meanwhile can enhance a

person

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skills and experiences.Next,

bussinesses

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businesses

will stay in old fashion way if the employer

don't

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encourage their

staffs

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to try on new trends because

this

can help wider a

person

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ideas

and imagination skills.

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,an individual who is likely to work in the same place over the century is hardly

to

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able to

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create new

ideas

for the

company

becuase

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because

of the limited

explore

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exploration

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on

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the

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fresh perspectives and

less

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challenges in the

company

.

In addition

,

this

can lead to low productivity and value

to

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the companies. In

constract

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contrast

,some

bussinesses

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businesses

like to maintain

same

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employees because

this

make

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them feel more secure by

rely

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on

the

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loyal employees to manage their tasks.

Furthermore

, some workers tend to stay

on

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one

company

which

make

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them feel comfortable and less

competition

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compared to other

stress

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stressful

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and uncentain

environment

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if they change their

company

. In conclusion, I disagree with

this

because not only will lower the value of the

company

but

also

limited

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an

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employee motivation and

ideas

to explore ,

although

some might oppose

with

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this

trends

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but

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there

no

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harm to try on new

ideas

.