The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram demonstrates how the average selling prices of copper,
nickel
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and
zinc
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changed monthly in 2014. In the very beginning, January, the float of
Nickel
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's value was the most apparent, which is 6%.
However
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, it kept decreasing in the following 5 months and hit the trough at -3 in June. Afterwards,
Nickel
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's price experienced ups and downs, reaching a plateau at 1 in December. Copper and
Zinc
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's selling prices changed much more smoothly than
Nickel
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's, the relevant amounts in January were 2 and 1 respectively. Both the two metals underwent fluctuations in the whole year and floated around a level of 0.
Finally
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,
Zinc
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reached 2 and Copper was 1.5. During the entire year, only the % change of
Zinc
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rose when compared with the original number. It is worth mentioning that the initial rank of the three metals became completely opposite in the end, with
Nickel
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's changing percentage being the lowest.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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