Many nations have a minimum age limit to drink. While other think that it is a better policy if there should not be many strict laws related to drinking. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Some say that a minimum
age
restriction is mandatory for alcohol
drinking and should be legalized, while
others believe that there shouldn't be any strict laws
. This
essay will argue although
mandating rules will make younger generations
retaliate implementing an age
restriction against drinking will instill fear in younger minds to adhere to government
policies.
Youngbloods have a tendency to revolt against any government
laws
and are more inclined towards doing things which are restricted. Most of the young population do not like to follow government
protocols and tend to do things which they are barred from, and alcohol
adultery is one of them. When young people engage in alcoholic drinking during their tender teenage years they do not understand the risks associated with drinking and its impact on the mind. For example
, In India, most of the gang rapes were done by teenage boys while
they were highly intoxicated with alcoholic drinks. When a person is intoxicated, the brain's power to judge moral values stops.
Younger minds are unable to judge between right and wrong behaviour. Teenage minds do not understand the difference between right and wrong moral values.Due to
a lot of crimes conducted
by younger Verb problem
committed
generations
, the government
has put strict laws
against underage drinking. By implementing such
policies, people are fearful of committing any anti-social behaviour and they take responsibility for their actions. For instance
, in the United States of America, the legal age
to drink is 18 years or older and implementing such
laws
has helped many state governments take control of heinous crimes committed by younger generations
.
In conclusion, placing an age
limit restriction on alcohol
drinking is important so that underage drinkers can understand the implications of illegal alcohol
drinking and the government
can curb the crimes committed by the younger generations
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