The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for

different purposes between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting

and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic line depicts how many visitors from all around the world visited the UK in order to various reasons including business,
holiday
, and meeting friends and relatives from the year 1989 until 2009.
Overall
, it is noticeable that a majority of people came to
this
area for
holiday
purposes. Meeting family members and friends,
on the other hand
, contains the lowest
number
. Regarding to comparison between the three categories,
holiday
has the highest
number
of all, as it is shown that 6.5
million
people came to the UK to spend their
holiday
in 1989.
This
number
,
moreover
, sharply rose
up
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between the years 1994 and 1999, and illustrates the highest
number
of 9
million
visitors.
This
data,
however
, experienced a decrease in 2004 and reached the same
number
as the starting point, and
then
eventually got to 9
million
in the
last
year of
this
period. Business,
on the other hand
, had a fluctuation and the data did not remain stable, as it started with 5
million
individuals in 1989 and
then
ended up with 7
million
visitors in the
last
year of
this
period.
Furthermore
, meeting family and friends, had the lowest
number
of individuals with 3.5
million
in 1989,
then
rose to the maximum
number
of 7
million
, but
then
fell to 1
million
less in
number
.
To sum up
, the greatest purpose for all the individuals in the globe is to visit
this
country in
holiday
time.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words holiday, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • trend
  • fluctuations
  • statistics
  • year-on-year comparison
  • peak periods
  • holidaymakers
  • business trips
  • educational tourism
  • significant increase/decrease
  • data interpretation
  • exponential growth
  • steady decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cultural events
  • tourist influx
  • graph analysis
  • quantitative change
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