The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the coment-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams below
shows
the stages used in the Change the verb form
show
cement
-making process and equipment
which helps to produce concrete out of Correct article usage
the equipment
cement
, for building purposes.
The first diagram
illustrates cement
production
which concludes 4 stages as
crushing limestone and clay, Change preposition
apply
then
mixing in mixer
crushed powder is mixed and Correct article usage
a mixer
heat
through Wrong verb form
heated
specialized
machine called Add an article
a specialized
rotating
heater, as it heats Correct article usage
a rotating
finally
goes to grinder
and becomes.
The second Add an article
the grinder
a grinder
diagram
shows concrete production
which includes 4 ingridients
, it is Correct your spelling
ingredients
cement
15 %,water 10%,sand 25% and gravel 50% . All these products are mixes
in Wrong verb form
mixed
machine
called Add an article
a machine
concrete
mixer.
Add an article
a concrete
Overall
, the first process diagram
shows cement
production
, meanwhile the second diagram
is about concrete production
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