You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved

to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the survey results with four different reasons between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
,
the
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employment is the main factor leading to
move
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to the capital city. Meanwhile, more and more people are willing to have
a
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better conditions for their dependents. Speaking of
the
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employment first, over 60000 people moved to the capital city in 2000, and
this
figure jumped to more than 90000 in 2010.
However
, it decreased to about 87000 in 2015. In terms of study, only around 25000 citizens left their hometown in 2000,
this
was followed by a dramatic rise in the next fifteen years, ranging from 48000 to 87000. When it comes to family/ friends and adventure, a similar amount can be seen in 2000, at 10000 and 11000 respectively. But the trend of family/friends was on the rise. It grew from 11000 to 22000 in
a decades
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decades
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. The amount of advantage just fluctuated at 11000.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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