The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.
The graph illustrates the proportion of five different industries in Brazil's economy in 2009 2019 and 2029
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finance accounts for a considerable amount of economic growth. Meanwhile, the food processing and the manufacturing are the least.
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finance first, the trend of Correct article usage
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was on the rise in the past, with over one-third and over 35% respectively, and it is expected to increase up to 40% in 2029. But the opposite trend can be seen in manufacturing. There were around 20% in 2009 and got down to just 15% in 2019. Linking Words
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figure will decrease again in a decade, at only 5%.
In terms of food processing and oil coal and gas, both of them achieved the highest ratio in 2019, at 22% and 32% respectively. The former will drop to around 10% and the latter will go back to a quarter again in 2029. At Linking Words
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, tourism offered more than 25% in 2009 but it will decrease by 5% and will remain at Linking Words
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