The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below illustrates five different industries' percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029.

The graph illustrates the proportion of five different industries in Brazil's economy in 2009 2019 and 2029

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it is clear that

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finance accounts for a considerable amount of economic growth. Meanwhile, the food processing and the manufacturing are the least. Speaking of

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finance first, the trend of

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was on the rise in the past, with over one-third and over 35% respectively, and it is expected to increase up to 40% in 2029. But the opposite trend can be seen in manufacturing. There were around 20% in 2009 and got down to just 15% in 2019.

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figure will decrease again in a decade, at only 5%. In terms of food processing and oil coal and gas, both of them achieved the highest ratio in 2019, at 22% and 32% respectively. The former will drop to around 10% and the latter will go back to a quarter again in 2029. At

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, tourism offered more than 25% in 2009 but it will decrease by 5% and will remain at

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level in 2029.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

175 words

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