In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that, nowadays, most
women
have full-time jobs as men
, so logic that men
and women
should share the housework
tasks equally.
On the one hand, I am totally agree that men
should help to their wife's works. If men
and women
share the housework
, it has some advantages for them. For instance
: some of the women
work
full-time, after the work
they have to do their housework
, and they feel always tired. Men
always sleep or rest after the work
. Nevertheless
women
never sleep or rest after the work
. It has only one reason for that women
are responsibil for their housework
.
On the other hand
, men
should not help to their wife's works. That is
because, men
is responsibil for earn money for their family and women
responsibil for housework
and children behaiver. For example
: women
do not have to work
, but women
want to help their husband or earn their own money to buy new clothes or collect jewelarry just like that other stuffs.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that women
need to do their work
and men
must to do their work
. Men
never force their wife to work
. Just ordinary, women
want to earn money to solve their own problems.Submitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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