The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
utilized for various aims in six continents of the world.
It can be seen that agricultural use accounts for most of countries
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the countries
excepting
North America and Europe. The opposite is true for mentioned countries when regarding Wrong verb form
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the percentage of Change preposition
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water
used for industrial purposes. The highest ratio of water
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stands at a level of 88% in Central Asia, while
the lowest figure is 39% in North America. Next to the most
second purpose, Europe has the highest amount of Correct quantifier usage
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water
used for industry, with 53%. So the figure for domestic use is very limited, with only 7% of water
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consumed in Central and South East Asia. In six selected countries, South America utilized Unnecessary verb
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water
for domestic purpose
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Overall
, it can be true that agriculture and industry are prioritized in all areas around the world, while
domestic is less focused on.Submitted by ntl250605 on
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