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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the proportion of
Australian
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exports
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 to
Japan
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, the US, China and
India
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 between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the percentage of
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exports
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 to
Japan
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 and
India
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, with the figure for
India
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 being the lowest throughout the period.
Conversely
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, the rate of
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exports
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 to
Japan
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 and the US witnessed a decrease. Just around 3% of
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exports
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 to China were seen in 1990, after which it experienced a significant rise to about 28% in 2012 and became the largest figure. A similar change, but to a lesser extent, can be seen in the figure for
India
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 from 2% at the beginning of the stage examined to 5%
at the end
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 of the period. Inversely, 25% of
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exports
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 to
Japan
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 were witnessed in 1990, followed by a decline before reaching 18% in 2012. Meanwhile, the proportion of
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exports
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 to the US started at 11%, after which it fluctuated strongly before ending at 5% in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, exports, japan, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports
  • Percentage
  • Trend
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Comparison
  • Economic partnership
  • Trade policy
  • Geopolitical events
  • Global economic conditions
  • Period
  • Market share
  • Years specified
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