In
this
age and era,
sports
play a crucial role in one's life.
of
people
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forChange preposition
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this
.
FewCorrect article usage
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people
believe that inviting players from all over the world is best for the
growth
of their
country
whereas
, others think that, it can be harmful for some reasons.
As perChange preposition
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my
iChange the capitalization
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think that
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sports
bring
to the
country
.
This
essay will show both
theChange the word
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views and my opinion in
upcomingCorrect article usage
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paragraphs.
To begin
with,
world-wideCorrect your spelling
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sports
eventFix the agreement mistake
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in one's
country
is very helpful in
risingCorrect your spelling
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the economic
growth
of the
country
which means that,
largeChange the article
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number of
people
and players will come from different
countries
in order to watch and play the games.
However
,
this
will make that
country
the
centerChange the spelling
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of attraction for tourists and
sports lovingAdd a hyphen
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individuals.
For instance
, a study was done on the economic
growth
related to
sports
in different
countries
the results showed that
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the
in which most
sports
events are held
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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more
growth
.
In addition
to
this
,
these events helps the
country
to attract
it'sCorrect your spelling
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culture and traditions. Tourists who have keen
interestsFix the agreement mistake
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in different cultures and learning
varietyCorrect article usage
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of languages play a vital role
forChange preposition
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the
country
which means that
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people
go back to their own
and talk about new
cultureFix the agreement mistake
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,
lifestyleFix the agreement mistake
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, food and clothing which
further
generates interest
ofChange preposition
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other touristChange the wording
another tourist
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to visit.
Apart from
this
,
spendsChange the verb form
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goodAdd an article
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amount of money
inChange preposition
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hotels and
cafe'sChange noun form
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which is a great seasonal income for
the Correct article usage
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society.
On the other hand
, many
thinksChange the verb form
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that the increase of tourist from all around the world
polluteCorrect subject-verb agreement
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their natural environment.
Moreover
,
people
are not aware
aboutChange the preposition
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the rules of that
country
.
For example
, a study was held which included some
countries
,
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result
that, the
country
which has more visitors
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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more pollution and uncleaned streets.
This
makeChange the verb form
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them feel bad about
sports
in their
countries
.
To conclude
, the government should make all the visitors clear about the rules in the
country
so that
this
should not harm the natural attractions of the place.