The line graph shows the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

The line graph shows the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.
The graph above illustrates the yearly amount for spending on average of two different types of
phone
services from 2001 to 2010. Generally speaking, it is apparent that the expenditure for
cell
phone
service
saw a constant decrease throughout the entire period,
while
the figure for residential
phone
service
rose over the same time frame. Focusing on the period 2001-2006, in 2001, most of the consumers chose to
cell
by residential
phone
, with the amount of services consumption standing at just below $700 in 2001, the peak of the whole survey,
while
the data for
cell
phone
service
was at only around $200 in the same year.
Subsequently
, the annual expenditures of these two categories of
phone
services were equal in 2006, at roughly $550. In the following 4-year period, there was a steady incline in the figure for
cell
phone
service
, reaching approximately $750 in 2010,
although
the average data for residential phones dropped continuously until the end of the whole investigation, which reached close to $400 in the
last
year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, cell, service with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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