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The line graph shows the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

The line graph shows the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.
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The graph above illustrates the yearly amount for spending on average of two different types of
phone
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 services from 2001 to 2010. Generally speaking, it is apparent that the expenditure for
cell
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phone
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service
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 saw a constant decrease throughout the entire period,
while
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 the figure for residential
phone
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service
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 rose over the same time frame. Focusing on the period 2001-2006, in 2001, most of the consumers chose to
cell
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 by residential
phone
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, with the amount of services consumption standing at just below $700 in 2001, the peak of the whole survey,
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 the data for
cell
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phone
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service
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 was at only around $200 in the same year.
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, the annual expenditures of these two categories of
phone
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 services were equal in 2006, at roughly $550. In the following 4-year period, there was a steady incline in the figure for
cell
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phone
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service
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, reaching approximately $750 in 2010,
although
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 the average data for residential phones dropped continuously until the end of the whole investigation, which reached close to $400 in the
last
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 year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, cell, service with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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